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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In
this
 present era, many people are opting to prepare
convenience
 foods due to reaching them easily.
Although
 increasing consumption of them has many advantages
such
 as being easy to prepare, the diversity of
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eal, the chemical ingredient in them drastically affect the health. Regardlessly, I believe that the beneficial effects overpower the detrimental ones.
First
, preparing
convenience
food
 is quite easy and fast that
it
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 facilitate modern life people
such
 as
time
-saving. In
this
 modern world, everyone is very busy and the main problem is
time
. Many of them are not able to find
time
 to handle their things to do on daily basis.
Besides
, capitalism forces people to work hard and it causes lacking
of
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free-
time
 obviously. Under favour of the frozen/canned foods, people become able to create free
time
 for themselves and their families.
For example
, a parent has an intense work pressure does not have
time
 and energy after work to cook for her/his family. But due to
convenience
food
, the family will
be
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ate
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a
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dinner at least.
Secondly
, it is irrefutable that the diversity is a merit of the canned and frozen nutritions.
First
 and foremost, individuals are able to reach different types of
food
 which
is
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 out of the season or produced on different territory.
For instance
, a person who lives in Europe can easily buy a can of pineapple for his Hawaii pizza. Uncontroversially,
this
 is the grace of technology in
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ood sector.
On the other hand
, the producing companies put a lot of chemicals in the package goods to make them durable. Especially genetically modified organisms have enormous danger for
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uman body. The chemicals are one of the reasons of being cancer. As a conclude,
convenience
 nutritions favour for
time
-saving and diversity. Yet the chemicals in them threat human health. What is healthy in
this
 modern
time
? The modernising in agriculture deaden organic and healthy yield.
Nonetheless
, the merits outstrip the demerits.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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