Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workspace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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digital and modern era, few people give their opinion that universities should provide corporate or workspace skill set and knowledge which can be useful in the future ,
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are many
indivual
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individual
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who thinks that colleges have only one job and
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to give basic
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curriculum
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in spite
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focus on the point that
undergradute
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undergraduate
or higher degree should come with
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experience of the course . Some society groups have their decisions in favour of
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iew that graduation or any higher degree should come with initial training of workplace ethics and work whatever field the
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student
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a huge amount of money to universities to
study
in order to get a job in desired company .
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guaranteed
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tudent left unemployed as they
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equired skills.
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every year
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engineer just to get a basic 4 lac rupee job ,
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only 30% of the mass succeed in it as most of them do not have appropriate skills which
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to the huge unemployment rate of
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on the other hand
, few
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individuals
suggests that universities functions
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at providing access to basic understanding of the courses
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not accepted by employers.
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raditional method of knowledge sharing where we all
study
and do not implement and move on in life.
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mentality comes from
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ew of the
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communities who more implied on
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study
than practical.
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example of
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edical field where
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not
study
practical till
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uman body and its risky to learn . To conclude , The main function of colleges
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to provide theory and practical both which can be useful for
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mployer as well as for
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tudent. They should be aware
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skills where they can easily migrate from college campuses to multinational companies building .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graduate
  • workplace
  • knowledge
  • access
  • useful
  • employer
  • function
  • preparing
  • fostering
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • intellectual curiosity
  • personal growth
  • professional growth
  • well-rounded individuals
  • lifelong learners
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