Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workspace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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digital and modern era, few people give their opinion that universities should provide corporate or workspace skill set and knowledge which can be useful in the future ,

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are many

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to give basic

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curriculum

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of its usefulness to organisations.

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essay will

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focus on the point that

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experience of the course . Some society groups have their decisions in favour of

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iew that graduation or any higher degree should come with initial training of workplace ethics and work whatever field the

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is studying ,

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a huge amount of money to universities to

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in order to get a job in desired company .

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few campuses in the nation do provide

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at least

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tudent left unemployed as they

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equired skills.

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every year

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amount of pupil pass the engineering test and become

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engineer just to get a basic 4 lac rupee job ,

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only 30% of the mass succeed in it as most of them do not have appropriate skills which

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to the huge unemployment rate of

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, few

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at providing access to basic understanding of the courses

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not accepted by employers.

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raditional method of knowledge sharing where we all

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and do not implement and move on in life.

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ew of the

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communities who more implied on

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than practical.

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edical field where

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not

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year of their undergraduate where they deal with

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uman body and its risky to learn . To conclude , The main function of colleges

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to provide theory and practical both which can be useful for

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mployer as well as for

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tudent. They should be aware

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skills where they can easily migrate from college campuses to multinational companies building .