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Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online. Does the advantage of this development outweigh disadvantage.

#business #meetings #trainings #place #advantage #development
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At present, technology has developed in every sector and many people do their
business
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 meetings and training online by using different platforms
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 as Trello, Skype and workplace.
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,
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 is a positive
development
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 for organisations but there are some disadvantages to
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. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs. On the positive side, due to online
development
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 individuals can save their
time
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 and money by doing meetings at their place or at home.
Time
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 has changed and now they do not have to travel miles away for meetings and training.
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, multinational organisations can showcase their
work
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 and expand their
business
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 to a foreign country by just have a
business
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 call and meeting online.
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, many IT companies and even small IT firms can do their
work
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 from anywhere because of internet and they can learn and perform tasks online,
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 they can maintain communication with their client through online platforms.
On the other hand
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, demand for remote jobs has increased, people are more doing
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 kind of jobs where they can do online
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 and meetings which is combining their professional and personal life because individuals are working from home that leads to disturbing their private life and they are
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 spending less
time
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 with family and closed ones while handling foreign clients and working 24 hours online.
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, a meeting is scheduled at different timezone for that one has to manage the
time
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 for
work
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 and adjust their own life because of it. In conclusion, there is no denying that
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development
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 has certain issues but it can be resolved by
time
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 management but it is evident that adopting
this
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development
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 leads to huge success as they can overseas
work
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, it helps them to earn more money and develop their
business
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.
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, the advantages of
this
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development
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 outweigh the disadvantages.
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