Recently, abortion has increased rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although
it is one of the splendid experiences for mothers to give birth to a
child
, it requires both proper mental and physical planning. As compared to the previous decade,
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abortion
has become a topic of controversial debate owing to its drastic increase. I am of the opinion that
abortion
should be legalize keeping certain constraints in mind as it should not be free-flowing activity across the globe. Let us
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delve deeper into both the school of thoughts to have a better understanding followed by my own verdict.
To begin
with, there are few valuable benefits if
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bortion of unwanted
child
is legalized. Primarily, in the present century teenagers gets into
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re-marital physical relationship leading to
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nplanned emergency as at times there are not aware of the consequences. To explain, teenagers and even adults at times get into physical activities in the advent of emotions or under the influence of alcohol which leads to unplanned pregnancies because the teenagers are mentally, financially and physically ready to welcome a
child
into
this
world. To cite an example, as per the survey conducted by WHO, in 2017, in Ireland over 10,000 teenage couples revealed that 65% of teenage girls had indulged in
abortion
activities just because they were not in a position to accommodate and up bring their
child
in
this
world.
On the contrary
, let us have a glimpse
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the reasons why
abortion
should be prohibited.
First
and foremost,
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ot of people are more inclined to have a boy
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of
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irl as certain illiterate people prefer aborting and murdering the unborn girl baby. To explicate, lot of Asian countries have
this
philosophy of having a baby boy
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of
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hild and
this
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should be banned by the governments because
this
has made way to a drastic decrease in female sex in numerous countries. To exemplify, as per the survey carried out by United States Census Bureau, in 2016, in
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S over top five Asian countries in the world revealed that female feticide had increased by 20% as compared to
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ear 2015. As far as my viewpoint is concerned, I believe that giving birth to a
child
should be a complete right of
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women as per his mental and physical stability so there should be a legalized
abortion
option available to her. To elaborate, bringing a new life in
this
earth is an immersive task which needs females to be emotionally, physically and financially strong in order to take care of her
child
and give her
child
the best upbringing. The females have to go through a lot of structural changes during pregnancies, it should be their decision of aborting the
child
if she is not in a state to deliver because of her career goals as well as aspirations or if she cannot take care of her
child
prominently.
For instance
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Sigmund Freud, an eminent psychologist in his study of human behaviour and cognitive skills stated that the mother who delivered her
child
as per her convenience and mental stabilities
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proved to be more physically fit, caring and emotionally connected to the
child
. To encapsulate, it can be concluded that
although
few believe that
abortion
should be banned, I feel it should be allowed with some guardrails. It would still be hard to take a stand at one point because
abortion
is still and would always be a hot topic before people can derive some appropriate conclusions that it should be allowed or banned.
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