A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As more and more scandals

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animals cruelty and mistreatment gain relevance in mainstream media, public opinion is no longer indifferent to the treatment domestic and wild living beings have been

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from animal protein industries, research laboratories or individuals that consider other forms of life are not worthing reverence, care or respect. And from my perspective, people are becoming aware of that in a positive way. Why do we pet our dogs and cats and eat our chickens, cows or pigs? That's an ethical question the underlies the topic of animal rights. Historically, many traditions rationalize the matter with a variety of arguments to justify the

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employment of

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animals

in the

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of human needs

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for food, transportation means, raw material sources or in medical or

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researches.

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, many materialist thinkers believe that animals do not feel pain or are aware of what is going on in a

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e.g. But many

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found, documented and demonstrated that these beliefs are

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from reality.

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our pets, other animals have emotions, feelings and understand what is happing in the environment so that they are able to suffer. These

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and perspectives based on ethical

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have influenced many movements around the globe that understand that animals should not be exploited the way they have been for centuries based in

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of deprecated beliefs. Animals rights bill

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been passed in many parliaments and legislation like the US Animal Welfare Act which was signed

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1966 prevents animals from cruelty and bad treatment in farms, zoos, circuses or research labs.

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, the vegan movement is an example that advocates against the animals

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mainly in industrial livestock productions where animals

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merely as

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any sanitation. I believe that new generations of consumers are more conscious and will no longer be tolerant or indifferent to cruelty or abuses involving other living beings. Every animal has the right to have their welfare preserved and to be treated with respect even if they are

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to become a bacon strip or a

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. The more aware people are,

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ore the

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they feel about other forms of

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. That's why I believe it is a

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positive

and ethical advancement.