In many developing countries, the majority of the population tends to be more concentrated on city life, which causes a variety of difficulties. In
this
essay, I’ll discuss the roots of these issues before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
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of all, the cities are providing people’s crucial needs like the clinic, college as well as the workplace. So, people are coming from the landscape to supply their necessities, resulting in traffic-clogged roads, air pollution, and stress, etc. Linking Words
Consequently
, citizens’ well-being is negatively affected in both body and soul, with physical issues Linking Words
such
as headaches, unhealthy organs, and psychological predicaments like anxiety, distress, and stress. To give you an idea, if you visit the infirmary, you’ll see children suffering from their illness, and adults taking stress and depression counselling from psychologists.
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Secondly
, on the bright side, there is still a group of people who prefer to live in the land. Linking Words
However
, they can’t satisfy their educational requirements and health needs properly. Linking Words
Therefore
, we can’t degrade them just because they came from a rural area to achieve a better life. Linking Words
Thus
, our priority should be developing the terrain, especially its soft infrastructures, like a hospital, school, store, and drugstore. Suppose that we build a new university with highly qualified mentors, the younger generation wouldn’t go to the urban area to achieve a higher degree, plus the graduators will develop their area.
In conclusion, we are only focusing on the city; the land is on our peripheral sight. Linking Words
Hence
, people should focus on the blurred side, which is why we should try our best to make it clear to everyone by developing rural areas.Linking Words
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