Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

Nowadays abroad
study
is mushrooming day by day. Some people think
although
abroad
study
has merited it's better to stay at homeland and
study
there because they think the
student
has to suffer from a different
culture
and living issues.
However
, in my opinion,I think even though
learner
will have some
problem
with abroad
study
it's can be overcome by managing everything properly.
This
essay will discuss both merits and demerits of abroad
study
and give an opinion on how abroad
study
assists in ameliorating learners skill. In one hand, some people assume pupil who leaves their homeland suffer from a plethora of issue. The main
problem
is they will have
homesickness
which atrociously affects their mind.
For instance
, recent research concluded that 80%pupil has
homesickness
when they go abroad
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study
. Another issue is the adjustment in a different
culture
, which is difficult for the
student
.
Moreover
, the
student
might have a
problem
in
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anguage of different
culture
country. To exemplify, a recent
study
concluded that
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anguage barrier has become one of the main obstacles for the
student
who travel abroad for
study
.
Hence
, pupils who leave their own country for their upgrade
study
major
problem
is
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anguage of different
culture
and
homesickness
.
However
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, abroad
study
has many merits.
Firstly
, the
learner
will get the opportunity to learn more about life and
culture
.
Furthermore
, they will become independent and more confident so can able to mitigate their
problem
by themselves.
For example
, if the
student
has issues to pay their fee or for food, they will work hard and will alleviate their problems by themselves.
In addition
,
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earner will learn more about life and will comprehend the value of money.
This
is because there will be no one to assists them to give money as their parents used to do. So they will learn more about the lifestyles and its values. In my opinion, even the abroad
study
has some demerits
such
as
homesickness
,
language
and
culture
issues, abroad
study
always gives an opportunity to grab more knowledge and explore themselves with different types of people and places.
Hence
, its overall aid in their interpersonal skill
such
as self-confident, hardworking, patience,
problem
-solving capabilities and so on.
Also
, nowadays,due to advance technology people can easily talk with their parents by means of media
such
as messenger, whap, Instagram. That way,
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earner doesn't have to suffer from
homesickness
as they can talk at any times. To conclude, even studying abroad has some demerits, in overall it has more advantages for the
learner
because they can explore and live with the different
culture
people.
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