Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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trend in the generation has made people expose to various sports. Nowadays people want to experience different sports
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of learning their danger just to satisfy their fun and curiosity. I totally agree to ban
such
sports that bring negative effect
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the health of the members.
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, the younger generation always
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in a systemic way of expressing their feelings through sports. Among that one of the dangerous sports
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activites
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had a new level of welcoming among the
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is skydiving.
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of the safety
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in
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there is a chance of accidents which lead to jeopardy.
For example
, during skydiving
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the participants are
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to follow certain safety measures. When they fail to follow the instructions there is high
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of risking
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life. In some cases ,
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echnical issue during the activity can
also
lead to
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azardous situation. These are some reasons why youngsters must not participate in
such
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incidents just for entertainment.
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, people who participate in
such
events are exposed to certain distress like stomach pain, vomiting and
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,
thus
results in damaging the health condition.
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, recent studies show that during
such
sports activities where people are exposed to sudden excitement or fear their blood pressure tend to increase leading to high blood flow to all parts of the body.
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results in
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eart attack or stress from performing in these events. In conclusion, everyone must participate in
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that are safe and secure. These sports which put people health in risk situation must be banned by the government.
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