The increase in tourism has led to the destruction of the environment, thus tourism ought to be banned in certain areas. What is your opinion?

Some people have an opinion that growth in

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ourism sector has led to

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in environmental issues and it should

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in some places. I strongly believe in the idea and my standpoint will be

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justified in following paragraphs.

First

and foremost, globalisation has resulted in

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oom in

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ourism industry and its practically impossible to control so many

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to stop littering. Wherever people are going they are just leaving piles of trashes behind whether its forest, natural park or sea beaches.

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in soil and water pollution.

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, according to the latest study done

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it has been found that water quality in

tourist

places

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along the lakes and rivers has decreased significantly in

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20 years and

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ot of

micro plastic

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and toxic chemical have made it unfit for drinking.

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ise in

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led to serious air pollution because of their carbon footprints. Construction of hotels and restaurants in touristy places has become the main reason behind

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ncrease in deforestation, in

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ygone era.

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, according to the latest survey done by United Nation it has been found that 50% of the deforestation has occurred in the cities famous amongst the

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and air quality in those cities has reached to its lowest levels. To conclude, tourism should be banned in specific touristy areas to protect the environment, as

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harp rise in

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umber of

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is directly responsible for increased air, water and soil pollution, which has increased

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an extent that environment is on the brink of becoming inhabitable in near future.