The increase in tourism has led to the destruction of the environment, thus tourism ought to be banned in certain areas. What is your opinion?

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in environmental issues and it should
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in some places. I strongly believe in the idea and my standpoint will be
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ourism industry and its practically impossible to control so many
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to stop littering. Wherever people are going they are just leaving piles of trashes behind whether its forest, natural park or sea beaches.
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in soil and water pollution.
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it has been found that water quality in
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along the lakes and rivers has decreased significantly in
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and toxic chemical have made it unfit for drinking.
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has
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led to serious air pollution because of their carbon footprints. Construction of hotels and restaurants in touristy places has become the main reason behind
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ncrease in deforestation, in
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, according to the latest survey done by United Nation it has been found that 50% of the deforestation has occurred in the cities famous amongst the
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and air quality in those cities has reached to its lowest levels. To conclude, tourism should be banned in specific touristy areas to protect the environment, as
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umber of
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is directly responsible for increased air, water and soil pollution, which has increased
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an extent that environment is on the brink of becoming inhabitable in near future.
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