Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The vote must be mandatory. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Fewer and fewer people have believed in propagandas and politicians. Because the most of candidates always doing promises, but after being elected, all the promises run out. Personally, I do not thing that
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must be mandatory, and I feel
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way for two reasons:
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, when the
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is mandatory ,arise several candidates and parties that do not idea what they do,
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, the
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only should be mandatory if the population had a study or an introduction about politics.
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of all, we must look at Brazil
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,
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country has been stolen for several years by politics. One of those the reasons, is the mess
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in the congress. There are countless parties and candidates every election, is impossible organize all them. The candidates doing several promised on the debates (heated debates), because they know that after elections, what was told, nobody will remind.
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, most of parties and candidates enter the dispute without even knowing the basics about project, laws etc. Brazil has the best
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system of the world,
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the population is hostage of politicians. The TSE (electoral superior court) say that all people must
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. So we are must obey the law and do our part.
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, people do not have a minimal study about politics, we are bombarded with propagandas every year without understand what means all those number, laws and projects laws. The interest of the government is not teaching about politics, but they treat the people like a puppets. In conclusion, the
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is very important, but shouldn´t be mandatory. People must have a decision whether want
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. While the nation doesn’t know how much power the
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is, we will never understand how we can choose our destiny.

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