Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology
is being improved tremendously in the past and at present. There is currently a contentious argument over whether the past developments in technology
is more advantageous to the public than the present developments. I totally disagree with this
notion because at present the developments are made to be used and afforded by the people and to protect the environment
.
Firstly
, the main reason why I agree that the current developments are useful is that these developments are made such
that a common man can buy or use the technology
without having to pay a lot of money. For instance
, Tesla has recently introduced a budget car which is not only cheap but is a luxury car with brand value. People with average income can buy this
vehicle and enjoy all the features that a premium car has. For this
reason, I strongly agree that the current technological developments are beneficial.
Secondly
, why I believe this
notion is due to the fact that the developments made nowadays are environment
friendly. For example
, there has been increased production and use of electric vehicles in the United States which has greatly reduced the amount of pollution which has been damaging the environment
. This
is why I would like to support that the present technology
is helpful.
In conclusion, I completely agree that the current developments in technology
have made the lives of ordinary people easier and joyful. Ordinary people can now buy and use the latest technology
along with protecting the environment
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