Some people think that children should always ask for their parent’s advice while others feel this is not important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whilst numerous individuals reckon that asking for the

advice

from parents should be mandatory for all the children, others hold that it's unnecessary. I believe that,

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advice

from parents is crucial at some point

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time, it's not required always. Both views will be discussed

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in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost, children are not capable of making the crucial decisions of their life.

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, they do not have the required knowledge and sufficient experience to

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the right decisions for themselves.

For instance

, a child does not know anything about the profession he wants to pursue. So, in

such

circumstances when he has to opt for the subjects in higher classes, it would always be better to take the

advice

from his parents, so that he does not have to regret his whole life for choosing the wrong career path.

On the other hand

, some

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that it is

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for children to

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any kind of

advice

from their parents. As it would make them dependent on their elders for everything and they would not be able to develop the confidence of decision making.

For example

, studies show that children who used to ask for suggestions from their guardians in all the matters

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were much less confident

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those who did not.

However

,

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own limitations

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as it does not take account of the situations where children have to take the crucial decisions for their career and life. To conclude,

although

seeking suggestions from parents is important in some situations, I reckon that it should not be made

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compulsory

for children to ask for their

advice

all the time. As they would not be able to develop the confidence of decision making if they stop making decisions on their own completely.