Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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I agree that people still recognize the value of festivals, they need exactly to know why festivals are being held.
On the one hand, by comparing to the past, people can easily search and share knowledge about festivals online because of technological advancement. Linking Words
Besides
, children have to learn about background knowledge of famous annual festivities since their childhood. Linking Words
Moreover
, in some schools and universities, students play a role to demonstrate the history of festivals and Linking Words
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is the greatest opportunity for the audience to gain general facts about festivals. Linking Words
For example
, most children including their parents wear traditional costumes and make-up in Halloween and learn about stories of Linking Words
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festival.
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On the other hand
, some people participate in festivals with full of excitement and enjoyment without knowing the purpose of celebration. Linking Words
In addition
, some traditional festivals vanished throughout the years because our past generations handed over little information about these festivals to future generations. Linking Words
Furthermore
, people look forward to having fun in festivals Linking Words
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of practising religion or tradition. Linking Words
For instance
, in Myanmar, there are few people who do religion in the Thingyan festival whereas many people splash water each other for enjoyment.
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there is plenty of information about traditional or religious festivals on websites, people still require to learn about these facts in order to prevent extinction.Linking Words
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