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It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a break down in family relationships and communication. (To what extent do you agree)

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it is
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 very simple that family members have their own electronic
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.
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 several people believe that all of
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echnological inventions will make people less intimate with family and be smaller to make conversations. From my point of view, I fully agree that modern technologies are made
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relationships with others worse. Nowadays people who have technological items
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 as smartphones, are made people less sociable.
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, several people think that these inventions do not have effects due to
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modern technologies like phones and etc., have many applications which can make contact with people.
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, the one application called Line, In
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 app has many functions.
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People not
 only can create their groups, but
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 people can video calls or voice calls in
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 app, so if people apply essential apps in mobile phone, they will not become estranged with families and decrease communications. Even though, some people argue that electronic
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 are made a lot of bad results for humans because these things can make people
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 to them and do not want to do anything
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else
. Instance, more and more people particularly children have their own phones and
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tablets
, so
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 they use every time and anywhere.
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, they should
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use hi-tech items in
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 ways. To conclude I feel that every people have their own equipment, but individual uses in the wrong ways, so some people think that
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 will make people do not intimate in relations and I strongly agree that
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 is bad things to talk with people less than before.
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