The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

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hole lot better than

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of it,

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the ministry will need to allocate a desirable amount of budget for it. I completely agree that the

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should take full responsibility for the

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care system by providing

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arge amount of money for preventing diseases.

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, the

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need to spend more money for promoting awareness campaign for

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as cancer and HIV, as these diseases mainly infect a person body by their bad habits or bad lifestyle or consuming products like

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igarette. For instances, if the

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will ban tobacco products and give awareness to the public about their deadly life-threatening effects, it will simply

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to

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better healthy lifestyle.

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, the

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needs to boost their

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care system by constructing more and more hospitals and even provide better food and water supply to the society so that it helps them for prevention of disease like malaria, dengue. These diseases originally

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from the water supply of

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society. For instances, 20

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ago, Vietnam country is hugely infected by

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malaria and even so

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very costly at that time, so to overcome that crisis, their

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mainly focused on the prevention of

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malaria rather than

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which actually cost them half as compare to the

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. In conclusion, I strongly recommend that

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should take the responsibility to manage their

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system so they need to provide more awareness campaign about healthy lifestyle and take appropriate steps for preventing

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diseases in their country.