Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?

It is considered by some that,

business

companies should make arrangements to facilitate sporting and social activities for the people in local communities.In my perspective, I totally agree with

this

statement, as it would indeed

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benefit

both these parties in

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ong run.

To begin

with, the popularity among the

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paramount importance for the

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success

of a

business

.By sponsoring the sports facilities and social activities, where the people tend to get together and enjoy, the trade name of the company gets popularised without much effort.

Moreover

, if the company has sponsored a building or a permanent leisure complex,

this

will certainly become a sustainable method of advertising of the

business

.

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, offering a sports complex or a place for social activities for

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ublic by trade companies

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will apparently give many merits to the society as well.

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involving in physical

excercises

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exercises

as well as social gatherings reduces physical and mental tension, and improve the health and overall well being of the

community

and quality of life.

This

invariably

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the economy of the individual member of the society as

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roductivity of a healthy being is exaggerated. Due to the fact that

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having a

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composed of members with

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budget, the companies

also

invariably get merited by having a wealthy group of customers.

For example

, according to a study conducted by the

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of Harvard on " The Local

business

and the

community

health", showed that

business

companies get 43%of more profit in the regions with

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ealthy

community

. In conclusion, it is evident that

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companies should concern more about facilitating leisure needs of the

community

such

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facilities and

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social

activities, owing to the fact that it gives long term

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both groups.