You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this apartment, and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter • Describe the situation • Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to let you know that I have been a tenant of the overseas student lodge since January

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year, but it is increasingly becoming challenging for me to concentrate on my work. Let me explain in detail. I share the room with another student who is hardly considerate of others.

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, he plays loud music in the middle of the night and often uses my personal mobile to call his friends. I try my best not to

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too much on these issues, but my roommate’s

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is consistently testing my patience. Even if I request him to put the volume down of his music player or inform

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the low credit on my mobile plan, he does not listen to me. Due to his repetitive

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, I cannot sleep well at night and

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day. Would it be possible to transfer me to another room or building available to overseas students? I don’t mind any accommodation as long as it is quiet, and the roommate is considerate of others. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, John Smith

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Accommodation officer
Dissatisfaction
Noise levels
Maintenance
Distractions
Study environment
Impair
Single occupancy
Prompt resolution
Inhabitable
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Hygiene
Communal living
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