You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match

Dear Tom, I hope you’re feeling better now from the unfortunate motorbike accident. I’ve got some exciting news to share with you. I’m absolutely delighted to tell you that our football team has won the semi-final match against ‘The Red.’ It was a sunny and hot summer Sunday and our suburban oval ground was flooded with local supporters. Due to
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holiday, tons of families
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came to the picnic area for BBQ but later
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they joined and cheered for the game after seeing the familiar faces. I was over the moon once the referee blew the final whistle and I couldn’t wait to celebrate the achievement.
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, everyone badly missed your high jump after scoring a goal. As you know, we don’t often get a festive environment after a win. I wish you a speedy recovery and looking forward to
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in the final match together. Take care. Your friend, John
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