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The number of people who are at risks of serious health problems due to overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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Recent decades have witnessed an enormous growth of
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besity epidemic in many developed countries. There is not the slightest doubt that people`s health status will be seriously threatened by
this
 issue.
This
 essay will illustrate the main factors contributing
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obesity
 problems and thereby elicit some feasible solutions.
Firstly
, current research has blamed increasing overweight population on the ubiquitous junk food. You are what you eat. In order to be fit, one needs to eat healthily. The excessive fat, which is hardly digested has been regarded as the major reason for
obesity
.
Secondly
, by spending more time on TV programs and browsing the internet, people have fewer opportunities to participate in sports activities. The accumulated calories would be expended only if one does enough physical exercises.
Last
 but not least,
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convenient transportation intensifies
this
 situation. Trains and automobiles are the favourable commuting methods of urban citizens. When walking and running are excluded from modern lifestyles, more and more people have to face overweight issues.
Thus
 a combination of unhealthy food, lack of physical exercise and modern lifestyle
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 contributed to the rise in
obesity
 problems amongst people.
However
, every cloud has a silver lining, governments should take
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responsibilities to help people escape from the
obesity
 dilemma.
To begin
, the production and sales of junk foods should be strictly constrained, especially to adolescents. On top of that, public service advertisements about healthy diet and physical exercises should be released through TV channels and various websites.
Furthermore
, local councils should organize more sports events, pine participants interests and provide them with an incentive to do more physical practices
such
 as walking, running and cycling. Henceforth, it can be confidently concluded that the growth of
obesity
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odern lifestyle. Governments are committed to guiding citizens to a healthy situation because health is wealth.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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