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The number of people who are at risks of serious health problems due to overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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Nowadays, numerous persons are in threat of significant health issues due to the increment of the obese in their body. There are
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the reasons behind
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, the major cognition of obesity among people is
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junk food. Eating junk foods on the regular basis is not keep them healthy and fit, rather than people are more vulnerable to the danger of various diseases in their upcoming future.
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, most people are addicted to
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technology, using
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nternet for buying food and even get
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 to their homes are the sign of them being lazy.
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, nowadays people are being less socialized, they meet their family and friends with the help of
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nternet and various their applications,
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 of visiting their houses without making an effort. To overcome
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. Another thing is the local councils should organize some
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 events
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 as cycling, running and walking in a year and try to engage most of the society to participate on it by adding few cash money prizes in it. Which will surely help people to motivate to care about their health. In conclusion, I believe that modern lifestyle had changed the civilization as fast foods,
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 proper awareness to them for
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ealthy lifestyle because health is wealth.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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