In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that children in developing countries, especially in rural locations, have lower access to

education

. Some people hold the belief that

this

trend could be tackled by installing more computers and the

internet

, I would agree with

this

statement that providing new schools and quality teachers are the top priority.

This

essay will shed light on both

of

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views. On the one hand, technology is thought as one of the best

solution

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to encourage children to come up to

education

for some reasons.

First

of all, the

internet

could help many pupils to take part in a variety of online training courses which should not need

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o to school.

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, with children must face

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geographic barriers, they could not go to school to study.

Thus

, the

internet

would help them to deal with

this

problem easier.

Furthermore

, children would self-study at home without having

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go to class because many children

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ive in remote areas do not have opportunities to go to extra classes to expand their knowledge.

Therefore

, they could study

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the

internet

.

However

, technology

also

has disadvantages. The most outstanding is that the

internet

may

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children’s health like eyes.

On the other hand

, there is not overwhelming why the role of schools and teachers is highly appreciated. The

first

reason is that school is the better environment for children in remote areas to improve their basic skills like communication, teamwork compared with technology.

For example

, pupils could play sports and do exercise with friends to improve their cooperation. Another reason is that teachers play an effective role in

education

. Because

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teachers,

such

as mentors, who are able to teach students how to use the reference resources in their lesson properly. In conclusion,

although

many people think that computers and the

internet

can tackle the less

education

in children who live in rural communities, I strongly believe that installing more schools and teachers is the best way to handle the problem.