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some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #punishments #offences #traffic #accidents #measures #road #safety
There is an argument about how to decrease
traffic
 accidents, while some
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 in new measures to be more effective than driving offences’ punishments, others see the later is the principle of reducing road problems. From my perspective, we need both together, they are not something to compare. On the one hand,
traffic
 rules and fines are essential in controlling driving offences. Harsh punishments are usually the most successful method to control both major and minor crimes. When offences pay al large fine or get their licences revoked for a time, they are going to think more and more before breaking
traffic
 restrictions again.
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, when I paid 325 dollars for running a red light, I become more stuck in
traffic
 law. SO harsh punishments are indispensable to decrease accidents on roads.
On the other hand
,there are many new methods that can help together with fines in reducing drivers’ mistakes that may threaten
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afety of others.
Such
 as increase the road capacity as well as quality to provide more facilities that prove safety.
Besides
, offer educational subject about road’ rights for high schools’ student to prepare them before getting their driving licence.
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an hour weekly to learn about safe driving will enhance students awareness with how to respect transport limitations . In conclusion, I can see obviously that both law and rules together with new ways
such
 as good road constructions, and educating youngers more about rights of roads, will augment each other in providing safe driving and decrease accidents.
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