some people say material possessions are very useful in bringing us happiness, but others argue that they are useless in terms of providing happiness. discuss both views and give your opinion and reasons

People are of the

opinion

that earthly

possesions

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possessions

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are a major

source

of

happiness

while

others hold a different view, arguing that wealth holds no value in bringing about

joy

.

Although

,

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material

possesions

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possessions

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may be a

source

of

happiness

, it does not provide permanent

joy

and may be associated with sadness. Both views

would

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be

further

discussed and my

opinion

given

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.

Happiness

is a derivative of earthly

possesions

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possessions

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, as believed by certain individuals. Achieving a milestone or completing a project

such

as building a mansion,

completing

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or completing

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a family size brings gladness to the heart of men which they hold on to for a long period of time.

For instance

, a cousin of mine who was overjoyed at his recent appointment as the

govenor

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governor

of

benue

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state, though tasked with many responsibilities, was glad

having

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to have

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achieved

such

feat

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a feat

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. He threw a grand party in celebration of his

happiness

.

In addition

, simple momentary things, like a gift, purchasing a car or

exceling

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excelling

at an examination can be a vital

source

of

joy

to individuals. In my

opinion

, wealth and earthly

possesions

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possessions

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play a role in generating

happiness

, but it is shortlived.

On the other hand

, a different view of wealth not contributing to

happiness

is held by some individuals.

Mans

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Mans's

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wants are insatiable and constantly

changes

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change

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from time to time,

thus

joy

is subjective.

Happiness

may occur following an achievement but it is temporary as another task is set, failure to fulfill

such

task

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a task

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may

subsequently

result in sadness which eventually leads to a depressed state.

For example

, a friend who failed an examination following the loss of his mum became depressed and almost committed suicide, but for the intervention of family members. In my

opinion

,

happiness

should be derived from an eternal

source

that changeth not.

Thus

, irrespective of life's situation, one

joy

is full. In conclusion, material

possesion

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possession

possessions

may contribute temporarily to

happiness

,

such

joy

is

short lived

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short-lived

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as

mans

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man's

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want fluctuates

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wants fluctuate

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and vanity equals vanity. God is the main

source

of everlasting

joy

.