Without capital punishments (the health penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increases. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In

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the people are

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suffering

from many challenges.

This

will lead to the raise the criminal activities.Some people opine that atrocity can be managed by taking a large

amount

of fine.I strongly agree with

this

view.I will give my stance with the

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arguments

in the below paragraphs.

To begin

with, the predominant reason to impose the

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new rules which takes the

money

from the

culprite

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culprit

culprits

will create an image of having

staright

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straight

law.

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will stop the criminals to do

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rong activity as they have to pay

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amount

of it as living in jail a certain

amount

of time is not enough.

Moreover

, a simple punishment can be

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encouraged

captive to do

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rong activity again.

Although

, people who live in cities can fell the insecure life, will be controlled by

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rules.

For instance

, nowadays many teenagers are not doing cybercrime activities. If they did only for their fun they would have to pay a large

amount

of it.

Furthermore

,authority can use

this

money

for their citizen to provide with some improvised work which can change their life.They can create a program which can help people in many aspects whom they needed.

Also

,

this

money

can be used by providing education and food for needy people.

For example

, research conducted shows that most of the

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violence

are created for not having enough food. In conclusion, as per my opinion, as creating

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new rules against

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atrocity

can build a fear of the government.

In addition

,

this

money

can be used in

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social work. Due to

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types of activity one individual can stop crime work.