Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country to further their studies Do you think this is a good Idea

Presently, a lot of students determine to

study

in foreign countries to their future about

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tudy. From my point of view, there are many benefits and

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little drawbacks in

this

idea

.

However

, I think that

this

is a good

idea

. On the one hand, some people particularly parents think that

this

idea

is a bad

idea

because parents do not want long distance with their children.

For example

, a lot of learners want to

study

abroad and they learn approximately 1 year or longer than, so parents did not see their kids. The

next

one,

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abroad is

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ery expensive cost, so parents do not want to spend a lot of money for children.

Thus

, people think that

this

idea

is bad.

On the other hand

, several people especially students think that

study

abroad is

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ery good

idea

because

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countries have differents style about teach, so if they go to learn in foreign countries, they will have many new

knowledges

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. Instance, the large group of students

study

in foreign countries

such

as USA, UK, Japan, Korea, Thailand and etc. They can improve many skills and

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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like cultures, languages, foods and styles in each country and when they come back, they can use their skills to

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countries, so

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eason why that they say

this

is the best

idea

. To sum up, many countries around the world, more and more students prefer to learn in

another countries

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another country

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for their future. Even though,

this

is the best

idea

.