Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country to further their studies Do you think this is a good Idea

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Presently, a lot of students determine to
study
Use synonyms
in foreign countries to their future about
Use synonyms
s
Add an article
the
show examples
tudy. From my point of view, there are many benefits and
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
little drawbacks in
this
Linking Words
idea
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
, I think that
this
Linking Words
is a good
idea
Use synonyms
. On the one hand, some people particularly parents think that
this
Linking Words
idea
Use synonyms
is a bad
idea
Use synonyms
because parents do not want long distance with their children.
For example
Linking Words
, a lot of learners want to
study
Use synonyms
abroad and they learn approximately 1 year or longer than, so parents did not see their kids. The
next
Linking Words
one,
study
Use synonyms
abroad is
v
Add an article
a
show examples
ery expensive cost, so parents do not want to spend a lot of money for children.
Thus
Linking Words
, people think that
this
Linking Words
idea
Use synonyms
is bad.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, several people especially students think that
study
Use synonyms
abroad is
v
Add an article
a
show examples
ery good
idea
Use synonyms
because
another
Replace the adjective
other
show examples
countries have differents style about teach, so if they go to learn in foreign countries, they will have many new
knowledges
Change the wording
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
show examples
. Instance, the large group of students
study
Use synonyms
in foreign countries
such
Linking Words
as USA, UK, Japan, Korea, Thailand and etc. They can improve many skills and
knowledges
Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
show examples
like cultures, languages, foods and styles in each country and when they come back, they can use their skills to
develop
Change the form of the verb
developing
show examples
countries, so
this
Linking Words
is
r
Add an article
the
a
show examples
eason why that they say
this
Linking Words
is the best
idea
Use synonyms
. To sum up, many countries around the world, more and more students prefer to learn in
another countries
Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
show examples
for their future. Even though,
this
Linking Words
is the best
idea
Use synonyms
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: