Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat an cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?
Presently, a
lot
of people have health
issues, so some people think that they should follow a vegetarian diet for their health
. From my point of view, I fully agree that meat
is made people unhealthy.
On the one hand, more and more people love to eat meat
likes beef, pork and etc., so in the future people will have problems about
their Verify preposition usage
with
health
. However
, several people think that meat
is not cause
that people Change the verb form
does not cause
h
ave care troubles because they think that people do not exercise is a cause. Add the particle
to
For example
, if people who eat a lot
of meat
, and they do not exercise, they will have some diseases such
as fat problem and cholesterol. Thus
, if they do not exercise, they will have a
bad Remove the article
apply
health
.
On the other hand
, more and more people argue that eating meat
is cause serious problems because meat
has a lot
of drawbacks. For example
, if people eat a lot
of meat
, they will flatulence. If they just eat beef and they do not eat v
egetable, they will flatulence. Add an article
a
the
Lastly
, people who love fried chickens and eat it everyday
, they will have a problem Replace the word
every day
on
their bones. Verify preposition usage
with
Therefore
, people should eat more vegetable
than meat
for
Verify preposition usage
to
make
their Change the verb form
making
health
better than before.
To sum up, today people prefer to eat meat
more than vegetable
, it makes people have a lot
of serious care problems, so people should to
eat Change the verb form
apply
v
egetable to protect their Add an article
a
health
and I strongly agree that people should not eat meat
too much, and they should turn to eat more salads.Submitted by thanaruporn.1 on
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