Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, Explain why you are writing Describe why you find the increase inappropriate What you want to do now--
Dear Mr Sharma,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about
your decision to increase the monthly rent of Change preposition
with
your
property that I live in.
I do not appreciate Change the word
the
this
hike because while
renting this
apartment you promised me that you will
not increase the rent for Wrong verb form
would
first
two years but you have not kept your word. Correct article usage
the first
Moreover
, the rent of this
property is already on higher
side, as Add an article
the higher
this
locality is far away from the city and I am already bearing extra transport expenses compared to what I payed
Correct your spelling
paid
while
living in the city.
In the end, I would urge you to reconsider your decision because I don't want to shift from here rightnow
because I am facing a financial crunch Correct your spelling
right now
due to
loss
of my job Correct article usage
the loss
last
month. However
, if you want to discuss this
matter in detail, I can visit your office next week.
I hope you will understand my situation. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jatinder.Submitted by mrsdns on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure all sentences flow smoothly; there were a few awkward transitions. For example, 'Moreover, the rent of this property is already on higher side, as this locality is far away from the city' could be clearer with a slight rephrasing.
task achievement
Minor grammatical adjustments would enhance readability. For instance, 'you will not increase the rent for first two years' should be 'for the first two years'.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses all parts of the prompt by clearly explaining the reason for writing, describing why the rent increase is inappropriate, and outlining what you want to happen next.
task achievement
The tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for addressing a landlord.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are well-formulated, which adds a professional touch.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite