A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem nations prosper rapidly when many people from other countries live in together in
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and harmony; get regarded as
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ascinating place to lodge in.
In contrast
, certain groups of people oppose and affirm
this
trend has an adverse ramification. I reckon the nation having many nationalities advances steadily.
First
of all, it is an inevitable fact that everyone has
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istinct perspective regarding their culture and ethnicity. If those people
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occupy
in one place, the place will surely flourish. All major advanced cities in the world have distinct people, so the
municipaty
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municipality
advances rapidly when divergent ethnicities get mixed.
For example
, almost all well-known corporations are invented in the USA, consisting of many different states;
also
, it gets regarded as
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umber 1 country among all nations in the world.
Hence
, governments should advocate
this
trend, as countries prosper by incorporating varying countries citizens.
Secondly
, it got proved that genius children get born if 2 men from distinct nations get married, while a disabled child gets born if relatives marry.
For instance
, king
Vladimr
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Vladimir
, who was born from his sister, meaning his father was the sister's brother, was able to walk as if an ordinary man, whereas brilliant people get born if 2 different cultures' men.
Thus
, it is necessary to mix
difffrent
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different
nations' people' blood. In conclusion, from the arguments and examples given, I firmly
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a country bloom when divergent ethnicity live together, as from
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people called a prodigy bear.
Therefore
, I state
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again
this
trend affects positively to the public.
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