1. Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued by some individuals that using
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like cars are the acceptable mode of
transportation
in cities, while others think that bicycles are better alternatives.
Although
using pedal cycles decrease the
pollution
in urban areas, I personally believe that using
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saves a lot of
time
, and a family can travel with comfort.
To begin
with, cycles reduce
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air
pollution
as they
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not release any fossil fuels. Nowadays, many people in urban sectors are using cycles for short distance purpose as a means to promote its usage to reduce
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environmental damage. For illustration, in India particularly in Delhi, the government took initiative to reduce the amount of air
pollution
to an extent by providing free cycles to school students and youngsters.
Moreover
, it helps to improve the fitness in riders
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and controls
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obesity related
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health problems.
However
, it is not user-friendly in harsh climatic conditions, and it becomes a deterrent to commute as a family.
On the other hand
, cars are efficient in saving
time
, and it is comfortable to make a journey with family members.
Also
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it is an attractive means of transport as small children cannot bear hot and cold weather.
Furthermore
, driving a car in urban areas save
time
, and that
time
can be utilized in a useful way.
For instance
, people in developed countries prefer to use four-wheelers for
transportation
as it is convenient, and most drivers get
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ense of satisfaction in driving. A survey conducted by Harvard University found that 56
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of drivers feel driving a car is not a strenuous activity, and they enjoy doing it. I opine that
this
method of
transportation
is convenient, and personally a good mode to bond the family together and professionally, it saves
time
. In conclusion, though some individuals consider bicycles as a safe mode of
transportation
in urban areas as it reduces
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pollution
, I accept it to a certain extent.
Nevertheless
, from my perspective cars are the effective method of commutation as it reduces the
time
taken to travel, and to make a trip as a family
this
is the best means of transport.
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