Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more sufficient.what are the advantages and disadvantages?

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dealings. Serving a common punishment for all kinds of criminal activities is believed to be effective by a growing number of people.
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a fixed penalty can lead to
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in
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rime rate even though it might not be something impartial. On the one hand,
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unifying the punishment for all types of criminal activities can increase
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public awareness about the consequences of breaking any laws. Since the penalty will be equal for all
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, they will be more conscious about the potential outcome of their anti-social behaviours.
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, when
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a bank ,and he knows about the strict,unified result of his action, he will probably reconsider it.
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, when the result of every violating activity is obvious, the time which should be spent in court will be saved.
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can help governments to save mone devoted for
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court of justice. Overall, it is
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ffective deterrent when people know the potential consequences of the
crime
the have a plan to commit ,and being
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can brings some benefits to both governments and people.
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, setting unified retribution for all violators
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not fair to some extends. To clarify more,it should be considered that not all
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rimes have been committed under equal situations.
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crime
with clear intention should not receive the same punishment the same as who
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crime
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account because all of
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eople who commit
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by their nature.
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rime to meet their
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’ basic needs ,and it is not
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with who commit murder under normal situations. To conclude, setting equal rules for all crimes can have
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etterent effect which can lead people to shun criminal activities.
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,it can be unfair not to consider criminal intentions.
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