The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity.

Nowadays

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opulation is alarmingly increasing throughout the world and due to

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facing

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a lot

of problems like illiteracy, pollution, lack of resources and many

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. Whereas, there are few reasons behind

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tremendous growth in

population

. In my opinion,

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is the biggest problem faced by humanity. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.

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, there are certain reasons behind

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population

, one of the prominent reason

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is illiteracy among people because poor people don'

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have adequate

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knowledge

to understand the biological situation.

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, in most of the backward societies

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people give birth to more than 2

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children

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.

For example

, South Africa is the highest in terms of

population

because of its illiteracy and lack of awareness.

Furthermore

, some traditional families are following

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atriarchy system in which their upcoming generation will take their culture ahead in future.

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the major reasons

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in birth rate which leads to

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uge

population

problem.

On the other hand

, there are several problems which humans are facing because of

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,

Firstly

increase in inhabitants causes scarcity of resources

such

as minerals, fuels, crops, and other natural resources.

Secondly

, many people don'

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ob, because there is high competition and companies don'

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acancy for new people.

For example

, India is extremely high in

population

and due to

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poverty rate is

also

high as they don'

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have proper labour.

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the serious issues which cannot be ignored and

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may

also

lead to criminal activities because individuals are finding

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lternate solution for survival. To sum up, in my opinion

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humanity is facing critical problems

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ncrease in

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orld's

population

.

Hence

, the nation should find the possible solution for

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otherwise

it will to lead to major complications for all.