Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Numerous characters deem enhancement of supermarket in developed nations is prompting bankrupts to many entrepreneurs and local people in

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, certain groups of people oppose and affirm

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trend affects positively to the public. I reckon the increasing number of supermarkets do not leave a place to minor

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runners, and

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phenomenon causes an adverse ramification to the public.

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of all, small

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runners and entrepreneurs are regarded as stimulators of their nation's

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. Many people run their own

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, meaning the

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will stay vibrant and flourish rapidly, as these people activate the

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, the USA has the world's strongest

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, as it started supporting their individual

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runners 400 years ago, while many other countries realised

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trend's virtue only a decades ago.

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, these countries now termed as developing nations and underdeveloped nations, so aiding local

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runners empowers the

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, there is a high probability these entrepreneurs'

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and companies to become global corporations enriching their nations'

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heavily. Each new

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runner has a unique idea, so at least 10 new firms among 1000 become well-known companies in their nation.

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, almost all global and most powerful corporations,

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as Amazon, Facebook, and Apple were invented in the USA, providing support for its new

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runners.

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, without new start-up companies nations will not advance as if they imagined. In conclusion, from the statements and examples given, I firmly believe that small

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and innovators are what makes a county industrialize.

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economic benefits
community identity
personalized customer service
strong relationships
wide variety of goods
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community spirit
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sponsorships
cultural heritage
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