In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that people enjoy travelling either abroad or within their
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. While some people argue that travelling abroad will never lose popularity,
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believe that in the future people will tend to spend their holidays in their
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with, I believe that a large number of people will soon spend their holidays in
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ocal tourist destination. One of the reasons is that flight tickets even economical tickets are quite expensive. Many people can not afford to book an abroad flight.
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, people from developing countries are suffering from the high rate of currency exchange which
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them to spend
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arge amount of money on food and accommodation.
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, in 2018, a study done by
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gyptian Ministry of Tourism stated that the number of people travelling abroad for tourism was declined by 30% compared to 2015.
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, another reason is that the widespread of
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social media has already contributed to the reduction of abroad tourism.
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is because people on social medial platforms are members of travel groups that entice them to explore their own
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, many local holidaymakers are subsidised by the government to provide affordable holidays for the local community.
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gyptian Ministry of the Youth has provided numerous trips to local tourist attractions
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as Luxor and Aswan for young people of age between 18 to 28. In conclusion, Due to travelling abroad being quite expensive and social media encourages people to explore their own
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, I believe that people will tend to enjoy the beauty of their
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soon.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestic tourism
  • international travel
  • cultural exchange
  • national pride
  • affordability
  • convenience
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
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