In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that people enjoy travelling either abroad or within their
country
. While some people argue that travelling abroad will never lose popularity, other
believe that in the future people will tend to spend their holidays in their Replace the word
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country
. In this
essay, I will explain my support to the latter view with examples.
To begin
with, I believe that a large number of people will soon spend their holidays in l
ocal tourist destination. One of the reasons is that flight tickets even economical tickets are quite expensive. Many people can not afford to book an abroad flight. Add an article
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In addition
, people from developing countries are suffering from the high rate of currency exchange which render
them to spend Change the verb form
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arge amount of money on food and accommodation. Change the article
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For example
, in 2018, a study done by E
gyptian Ministry of Tourism stated that the number of people travelling abroad for tourism was declined by 30% compared to 2015.
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Moreover
, another reason is that the widespread of the
social media has already contributed to the reduction of abroad tourism. Remove the article
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This
is because people on social medial platforms are members of travel groups that entice them to explore their own country
. Furthermore
, many local holidaymakers are subsidised by the government to provide affordable holidays for the local community. For instance
, since 2013, E
gyptian Ministry of the Youth has provided numerous trips to local tourist attractions Add an article
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such
as Luxor and Aswan for young people of age between 18 to 28.
In conclusion, Due to travelling abroad being quite expensive and social media encourages people to explore their own country
, I believe that people will tend to enjoy the beauty of their country
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