Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise, apologise and describe what action you will take?

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Dear Mr Mehra, I am writing in response to your letter about noise from my house, it is because of cupboard is broken down and I am fixing it by myself, so while doing it I need to use drill machine and drill machine is making noise. For
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time just want to sincerely apologize for the inconvenience. My closet is now fixed and need not use a drill machine again. As you know I am not an expert
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doing these kinds of activities so the solution was noisy and time taking. Forgoing forward I will call any expert for faxing my sideboard if it is broken down and that will lead to a less noisy solution for
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problem. I would love to invite you to my home for dinner so I will show you my kitchen and cupboard. Please accept my dinner invite and apologise
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. Thank You Mohit
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