In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, it is suggested that minor people have earned too much heavy wage rather than ordinary citizens. In

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phenomenon but personally, I agree that the benefits of being rich people's social influence which involved leading to activate demand of the economy.

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with, there is an argument that someones who received plenty of income from their companies or workplaces tend to occur industry progress.

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because those wealthy people tend to consume their money

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various fields.

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, most artistic works and masterpieces had

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by millionaires, those products which represent the country's

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degree of development. Aside from that, without those people's consumption, it is hard to counter attacks by

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low economy.

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of that millionaires have brought positive influences in countries.

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, for a non-discrimination society, some countries argue that governments have to restrict the individual's revenues.

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, they deal importantly with equal property among the public and they believe that

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revise will reduce the figure of poverty.

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, North Korea, the country has clung to the socialism system for citizens' equality for a long time. But, recently, the country's politics are not going well, with most people are poor. More importantly, most people live in the capitalist world.

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, if the government establish new regulation for organizing private's incomes, they need alternatives to reflect the realistic requirements, not relying on the socialism system. In conclusion,

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earning huge salaries could destroy social equality, it is more likely to have valuable impacts on the countries.

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, it is convincing that the government and relevant organizations should keep

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situation.