Many university students do part-time work while studying at university. Is this a positive or negative development?

Over the

last

few years, it has become a trend that

university

scholars

work

part-time jobs while they are studying. In my opinion,

this

may have many detrimental effects on them and in

this

essay, I will support my view with valid arguments and examples.

To begin

with, the main reason why I believe that working while studying

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university

is disadvantageous is that it might adversely affect students’ academic performance.

This

is because they become time-poor and can not focus on their studies.

For example

, it has been proven that working students tend to get lower grades than their peers. Indeed, only when they put all their time and efforts on studying will they be able to boost their academic level.

Furthermore

, not only does part-time

work

affect scholars’ study but it may

also

lead to some psychological problems

such

as depression and anxiety disorders. Since working students are usually under stress to balance between their

work

and study, they eventually become depressed. Seldom does

this

occur if they focus only on their tuition

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For instance

, according to a survey conducted by the Egyptian Ministry of Education, 30% of tertiary education students suffer from stress and anxiety as they

work

while studying.

Hence

, it is far better for tutees to start their career after finishing

university

. In conclusion, owing to the increasing cost of living, some

university

students are forced to do part-time jobs.

However

, I believe

this

is a negative development which has devastating impacts on their educational level as well as their psychological health.