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Many university students do part-time work while studying at university. Is this a positive or negative development?

#university #students #work #development
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Over the
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 scholars
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 part-time jobs while they are studying. In my opinion,
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 may have many detrimental effects on them and in
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 with, the main reason why I believe that working while studying
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 is disadvantageous is that it might adversely affect students’ academic performance.
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 is because they become time-poor and can not focus on their studies.
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, it has been proven that working students tend to get lower grades than their peers. Indeed, only when they put all their time and efforts on studying will they be able to boost their academic level.
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, not only does part-time
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 affect scholars’ study but it may
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 lead to some psychological problems
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 as depression and anxiety disorders. Since working students are usually under stress to balance between their
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 and study, they eventually become depressed. Seldom does
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 occur if they focus only on their tuition
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, according to a survey conducted by the Egyptian Ministry of Education, 30% of tertiary education students suffer from stress and anxiety as they
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 while studying.
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, it is far better for tutees to start their career after finishing
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. In conclusion, owing to the increasing cost of living, some
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 students are forced to do part-time jobs.
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, I believe
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 is a negative development which has devastating impacts on their educational level as well as their psychological health.
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