Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Several people think that teachers should teach students about
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school
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, other people say it will waste their student's
time
classes. From my point of view, teaching news at
school
are wasted their
time
to learning about their courses. On the one hand, some people believe that students should be taught by professors when they learn in classes because people do not watch international news a
lot
, so teachers can tell them about famous and world news that students should know.
For example
, when students learn finished at
school
and go home. Actually, when children stay at home, they always do a
lot
of activities
such
as play video games, dance or talk with their parents. They did not watch television much, so they do not know what happens in the world.
Thus
, teachers can tell about news in their subjects.
On the other hand
, more and more people argue that it is very waste their
time
when teachers teach about international news because
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at
school
, they should learn other courses
such
as Math, Science, History and English. They should learn these subjects.
For example
, a
lot
of people prefer to play social media, so they can learn about
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, teachers must
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teach only subjects that they teach, so it wastes their
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study at
school
. To sum up,a
lot
of professors should tell famous news to students when they have classes. While other people think that it waste students
time
and I believe that teachers who tell
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