Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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are wasted their
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to learning about their courses. On the one hand, some people believe that students should be taught by professors when they learn in classes because people do not watch international news a
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, so teachers can tell them about famous and world news that students should know.
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, when students learn finished at
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and go home. Actually, when children stay at home, they always do a
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as play video games, dance or talk with their parents. They did not watch television much, so they do not know what happens in the world.
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, teachers can tell about news in their subjects.
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, more and more people argue that it is very waste their
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when teachers teach about international news because
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, they should learn other courses
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as Math, Science, History and English. They should learn these subjects.
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of people prefer to play social media, so they can learn about
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teach only subjects that they teach, so it wastes their
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of professors should tell famous news to students when they have classes. While other people think that it waste students
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and I believe that teachers who tell
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