Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. why is this ? what problem does this cause?

Many people come from the village and small town to search for employment and for better living and
also
come to urban areas for their studies because of lack of education system and lack of job opportunity in their areas.
To begin
with various migrates in urban areas for a better life as a consequence over-polluted and urban areas are facing a lot of problems the
first
problem is a shortage of house space every day people come from different places it increases the population of urban areas and Housing used demand increasing rapidly so that's why people have no place for living people are living in a very difficult situation and
government
not able to provide sufficient places for people but the
government
should launch large housing so that people can live easily in an urban area with proper accommodation. Apart from
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ousing over pollution in urban areas create a burden in transportation all public transportation overcrowded and everyone places
also
overcrowded migrate
also
use private transport to go anywhere so that's why trains and buses are overcrowded everyone suffers from these problems in urban areas migrates might do not come in urban areas if industries and colleges open their other branches in villages and towns and
government
give migrates job opportunity in their area and better payment
government
should provide a proper facility in their areas with
this
problems will be solved in concluding nowadays urban areas facing a lot of problems
this
problem can only solve when
Government
and individuals party speed to solve
this
problem.
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