In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In the 21st century, a growing number of nations face a situation where their citizens must travel away from

friends

and family to find employment.

While

there are certain drawbacks, I believe the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. I will clarify my statements with relevant arguments in the following paragraphs. 

To begin

with, migrating to another place for work offers several advantages. There are often numerous opportunities waiting for those who relocate. The challenging environment will

also

significantly develop

workers

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skills. These developed skills can lead to promotions and higher income in the workplace.

Additionally

, people may feel freer to work when they are not burdened by family pressures.

For instance

, a recent study in India revealed that many teenagers engage in risky behaviour

due to

peer influence.

Therefore

, moving away from

friends

and family to work can help avoid

such

situations. 

On the other hand

, living away from family has numerous downsides. If a person lives away from their parents, they may not receive help or care if they become ill.

Furthermore

, human beings often experience loneliness and depression, and in

such

cases, they need

friends

to stay motivated and strong. These challenging situations can lead to mental illness, which can result in depression and anxiety in the future.

For example

, the suicide rate in China and Japan is increasing at an alarming rate

due to

high stress and anxiety among citizens.  In conclusion,

while

there is an undeniable drawback to

peoples

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mental health if they move away from

friends

and family to find a career, the advantages of higher income and developed skills are significant enough to outweigh the disadvantages.