Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.

Numerous people often debate whether entertainment related to arts venues including museums and
art
galleries should be free of cost or not.
Although
many voices for it being cost-free, I would support those who are of the opposite opinion. I will discuss both the views and reasons for my support for the latter in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, those who
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the view that access to museums and
art
galleries should be free of charge for the common people due to educational benefits. As more and more individuals will visit these places, they might get to know a lot about our history and various forms of arts.
For example
, 'The War' museum in Jaipur exhibits artefacts related to the battles fought by various rulers of the city during
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ast 500 years.
As a result
, it may enhance the knowledge and understanding of the general public about
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local history and culture.
However
, I believe,it is important to acknowledge that preserving museums and
art
galleries are mammoth tasks due to huge maintenance costs.
This
is because a lot of workers are hired to preserve the antiques kept in these places.
For instance
, Big Splash is a renowned museum situated in New Delhi employs around 30 workers for cleaning, security and
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perseverance
of various artefacts. As a consequence, a huge amount of cash is spent in form of remuneration for their employees.
In contrast
, if people are admitted free of cost in the museums and
art
galleries, they might not be able to sustain due to lack of funds. In conclusion,
although
having free access to museums and
art
galleries brings benefits of educating citizens, in my opinion, it should not be made cost-free owing to enormous conservational costs.
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