In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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The given picture reveals the process of uplifting

water

from the ground with the help of the solar system. Overall, it is a long and time-consuming process. Every step should be performed carefully and proper apparatus

such

as solar panels,

water

tank, well or bore, the motor is needed. At a fleeting glance, it is vivid that underground bore or well is connected with the pump which is hanged in a well or bore which runs with electricity and a solar panel is installed on the earth on a long pole and faced towards the sun. The solar panel has photovoltaic cells which absorb solar radiation and converted into electricity.

Then

in the

step, direct current is supplied from solar panel to the pump and motor starts pumping

water

from the earth. At the end of the process,

water

is collected into a big

water

tank which

further

supplies

water

to villagers for domestic use.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

156 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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