Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent years, it is often suggested that the degree of intelligence

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, not obtainable. In

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statements but personally, I feel that ordinary people

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could become an intelligent person because of the technology advances.

To begin

with, there is an argument that being smart people have to possess high intelligence as innate.

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comprehension and concentrate abilities after birth.

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because,

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, most brilliant children tend to prefer reading and try to understand the theoretical information, even though too young.

Moreover

, those minors would get high percentage

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marks in the academic score.

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, it is undeniable that

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innate skills are important to assure their intelligence.

On the contrary

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, others argue that, as mentioned above,

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utdated idea.

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is because, according to the times, the public could get plenty of valuable data, using smart gadgets.

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, if people do no have intelligent gifts from their parents, people could be genius with their own efforts.

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one of the famous celebrities in Korea, he was foolish during school class, while he has become a smart person for changing his life pattern to reading news, every day.

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of

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idea which people could promote

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knowledge abilities after born. In conclusion, genius,

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some of them having innate gifts, are more likely to be by their investing time and efforts. So, on account of generation progress, it is convincing that people could not

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gifted abilities and try to accept technology's

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