In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. Write at least 250 words.

In recent times,
crime
has
became
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a global issue and it is increasing at an alarming rate. I believe major reasons behind
this
are lack of
education
and unemployment rates. To resolve
this
problem, the
government
should come up with employment opportunities and free
education
for people in the breadline. Nowadays, the
crime
rates are enormous due to the lack of basic
education
and jobs.
Education
plays a significant role in shaping the behavioural pattern of people, which in turn makes them
to
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understand the true meaning of their deeds.
However
, in developing countries
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the vast majority of
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the

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population are illiterate, which has a deleterious impact on
the
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society.
In addition
to
this
, as it is rightly said, “An idle mind is a devil’s workshop"
,
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when people are without jobs, they tend to steal or go to any extreme to full fill their basic needs.
As a result
, they take
crime
as an option to acquire all the richness in life. To tackle these predicaments, the
government
should take initiatives to provide free primary
education
to all people regardless of the status in
the
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society, particularly in rural areas.
This
would bring a drastic change in
i
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an

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ndividual’s mind and thinking ability.
Moreover
, the
government
should bring forth a plethora of job options so that each and every individual will have his earning, that might not force him to think in a crooked way.
Similarly
, the
government
can come up with compensations. In lieu of compensation, people should be made to do social and community work. In conclusion, there is
an
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whopping increase in the
crime
levels due to illiteracy and unemployment, which could be eradicated by the adequate measures of the
government
in the form of providing free primary
education
to all, and by creating jobs opportunities.
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