In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. Write at least 250 words.

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a global issue and it is increasing at an alarming rate. I believe major reasons behind

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are lack of

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and unemployment rates. To resolve

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problem, the

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should come up with employment opportunities and free

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for people in the breadline. Nowadays, the

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rates are enormous due to the lack of basic

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and jobs.

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plays a significant role in shaping the behavioural pattern of people, which in turn makes them

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understand the true meaning of their deeds.

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, in developing countries

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the vast majority of

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population are illiterate, which has a deleterious impact on

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society.

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, as it is rightly said, “An idle mind is a devil’s workshop"

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when people are without jobs, they tend to steal or go to any extreme to full fill their basic needs.

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, they take

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as an option to acquire all the richness in life. To tackle these predicaments, the

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should take initiatives to provide free primary

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to all people regardless of the status in

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society, particularly in rural areas.

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would bring a drastic change in

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ndividual’s mind and thinking ability.

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, the

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should bring forth a plethora of job options so that each and every individual will have his earning, that might not force him to think in a crooked way.

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, the

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can come up with compensations. In lieu of compensation, people should be made to do social and community work. In conclusion, there is

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whopping increase in the

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levels due to illiteracy and unemployment, which could be eradicated by the adequate measures of the

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in the form of providing free primary

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to all, and by creating jobs opportunities.