Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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's temperaments. Some

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argue that it depends on genetic information, not around

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nvironment but personally, I disagree what has been mentioned above because I feel that

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's characters tend to affect by individual the given circumstance

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as academic pieces of training and upbringings. Following are the reasons.

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with, student's could obtain a lot of valuable knowledge in school lives.

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, they could learn avoiding impolite attitudes and being mature.

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, in the class, pupil's insist accurate their own statements with peers and build teamwork. For those cases, they could acquire favourable personalities, which would promote their lifestyles more than the congenital temperament.

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would be altered by education, not maintaining

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ifelong span. Aside from that, for influences by parenting, children could be set up their own character. To specify, most parents tend to nurture appropriate education for building useful

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they have worrisome ground if they hand down parent's drawbacks.

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Han who is one of the most famous owners in Korea grew up in poverty economic background, his parents try to bringing possession as optimistic

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he became a successful chairman.

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, children could change their trait by parent's help. In conclusion,

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remaining their giften character for

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ermanent period, is more likely to accept surround environments

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as schools and domestic education.

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, I feel it is convincing that the relevant schools and parents should need to provide

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aluable learning opportunity for improving children's

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more than brith.