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Research has shown that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertising of certain food products should be banned in the same way as the advertising of cigarettes is banned. Do you agree or disagree?

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On acknowledging the severe consequences that compulsive eating would bring, many believe that some kinds of
food
 should be devoid of advertisements.
However
, it seems to me that
food
products
 are entitled to advertise as any other
products
. On the one hand, I understand why it is suggested that advertising on some sorts of
food
 should be banned. When exposed to tempting
food
 plus celebrity endorsements, foodies would feel the urge to devour what is being shown on television without concerning whether it will advantage them or not.
Therefore
, only prestigious manufacturers passing strict censor procedures would be allowed to approach the audience.
This
 ensures consumers to discern which
food
 benefits them while qualified producers have got a chance to establish their identity and commitment to providing the best in quality. From the opposite angle, it is unfair for both entrepreneurs and consumers with regard to legislation on
food
 advertising. Since buyers tend to watch advertisements for reference to the merits of
food
, prohibiting commercials will prevent people from making an informed choice, not to mention the fact that customers may pay dearly for a brand name of which quality has no dissimilarity from the non-advertising
products
. On the level of producers, no advertising campaign serves as a hindrance to the sales of their company, particularly in the age of social media as well as job opportunities would be on edge. The odds are that graphic artists, directors or employees majoring marketing would be redundant when having restricted job offers, and in turn causes
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risis in society. In conclusion, I believe that any
food
-making firms should be allowed to promote their
products
 for the sake of eaters and manufacturers themselves.
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