Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Many people believe that there

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The singular verb form is does not seem to agree with the plural subject inappropriate and unprofessional advertisements used recently in society. Consider changing the verb form.

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inappropriate and unprofessional advertisements used recently in society. From my perspective, I strongly agree with

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approach, nowadays, some methods of advertising become unacceptable, especially when geared toward

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The pronoun it may be unnecessary. Consider removing it.

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clearly, companies advertise their objects whatever their effect on

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The noun phrase population seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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opulation. Many of these products have had

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The noun phrase negative influence seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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egative influence on people especially younger ones who can not differentiate between bad and good things. An obvious example of these commercials, those of fast food or soda drinks, which is considered the main cause of obesity between generations in

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recent years. Sponsors are used to enforcing their adverts on us while we are watching TV or browsing the web.

Children

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pester their parents to buy these issues, schools need to increase awareness of

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rawbacks of these objects.

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, the use of

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movies’ heroes to offer publicity of some institutions’ appliance is unethical. Much more of manufacturers nowadays focus on their profits without taking in consideration moral values. So, public organizations together with governments should take their responsibilities to protect consumers from there announcements, by banning exhibiting of harmful things.

For example

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, smoking posters should be prohibited by law in any place

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erves

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or adolescents. In conclusion, while ways of advertising become unprofessional, unacceptable and sometimes unethical, we need to increase the awareness of their negative impacts as well as set rules and restrictions for institutions to follow.