It is better for college students to live away from home rather than live at home with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In some countries, it is common to see graduate
students
leaving their Use synonyms
parents
' house to attend a college course. Some people believe it is better for them to live by their own means rather than live with their Use synonyms
parents
during graduation. I disagree with Use synonyms
this
idea and Linking Words
this
essay will present arguments to explain my opinion.
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First
, living away from home can increase the pressure for money. At the same time that it is necessary to pay the loans, which many Linking Words
students
take to enter the university, it is Use synonyms
also
necessary to have money to cover all the cost of living. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
students
have to work full-time and Use synonyms
also
attend classes. Linking Words
For example
, many Linking Words
students
have entry-level jobs, Use synonyms
however
, those jobs are not enough to pay all the bills and, Linking Words
as a result
, they need to ask their Linking Words
parents
for money.
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Second
, college courses are highly demanding and psychological support is needed throughout the process. To illustrate, often Linking Words
students
are diagnosed with burnout, which is a disease concerning high levels of stress. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
students
need some psychological help and if they live with their Use synonyms
parents
, they will have someone to rely on. Use synonyms
Finally
, some researches have shown that Linking Words
students
who live with their Use synonyms
parents
have better academic performance. Having better grades means that those graduates will have better jobs opportunities as soon as they finish their courses.
To sum up, I believe the best option for graduates is to live with their Use synonyms
parents
. Not only will they have less financial need, but Use synonyms
also
they will have someone to help them during difficult moments.Linking Words
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