Some people think that the (government should provide (assistance) to (all kinds of artists) including painters, musicians, and poets. However, other people think that (this is a waste of money). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A highly controversial issue relates whether the state should offer support to artists in general or if
this
measure is only a matter of wasting people's money. In
this
essay, I will examine both points of view and explain why I believe that the arguments against the assistance are stronger. It is commonly believed that artist should receive some extra money from governs in order o entice them to keed their jobs considerable outweighs its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that
arts
, in general, are important for society entertainment, which involves music, painting or acting;
therefore
, artists are considered to be the tools that make
arts
. It is
also
possible to say that
this
enterprise come forward to evaluate society. A good example here
are
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the songs played by important musicians along the years
such
as Beethoven, Mozart to name but a few that represents an important historical context in each period of society.
On the other hand
, others believe that
arts
should not have finance support from the government, which means that there are other important measures that call for an emergency. It is often argued that issues related to safety, education and health, which is encountered in the most part of cities, are a way more important than
arts
. A
second
point is that individuals can perfectly live without resort to
arts
while no one can live without health. A particularly good example here is in Brazil, where millions of reais are spent every year by the government with carnival an important local festival,
however
, its rates of lower education call for more investment. In conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I feel that
arts
should not count on public money at all.
This
is because there are other important issues to be solved that governments can not rule out at any circumstance
such
as health and safety.
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