Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some

children

and teenagers use their

phones

every day.

This

is because there are lots of functions of these gadgets;

however

, I do not agree with

this

statement

due to

health problems after using telephones for hours. Nowadays, millions of

children

have their

phones

at an early age and they use them for different aims. As I mentioned, there are lots of functions of smartphones like maps, cameras, studies,

games

, social media, chatting, etc. Of course, some

children

use their

phones

to improve their knowledge about

this

world. But, there are

also

kids that spend their time just playing video

games

and watching videos.

By contrast

, there is one fact that these uses of

phones

are interesting for all

children

and teenagers. They can spend their time for lots of reasons, but all of these reasons are interesting for users.

For example

, my brother spends about 3 hours using his phone every day, but he uses it for studying and video

games

. So he is interested in these functions of smartphones.

However

, even

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these gadgets is so interesting, I cannot agree

due to

the health issues of people. First of all, smartphones are harmful

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our eyes with their ultraviolet lights, and in the end, we will need to wear glasses for better visibility even at an early age.

According to

scientists, about 45% of

children

in our world wear glasses because of

phones

. Even my brother

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I mentioned started to wear glasses when he was just 6 years old. In conclusion, it is interesting to play video

games

, watch some videos, or even study by phone;

however

, I disagree with it because it is

also

harmful

for

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our health.