Some people think that the (government should provide (assistance) to (all kinds of artists) including painters, musicians, and poets. However, other people think that (this is a waste of money). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A highly controversial issue relates
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the state should offer support to artists in general or if
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measure is only a matter of wasting people's money. In
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assistance are stronger. It is commonly believed that artist should receive some extra money from
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in order
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entice them to
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their jobs
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outweighs its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
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is that
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, in general, are important for
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entertainment, which involves music, painting or acting;
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, artists are considered to be the tools that make
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. It is
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possible to say that
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enterprise
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forward to evaluate society. A good example here
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the songs played by important musicians
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the years
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as Beethoven,
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and Mozart
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to name but a few that
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an important historical context in each period of society.
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, others believe that
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should not have
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support from the government, which means that there are other important measures that call for an emergency. It is often argued that issues related to safety, education and health, which
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encountered in
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most part of cities, are
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way more important than
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arts
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the arts
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. A second point is that individuals can perfectly live without
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to
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no one can live without health. A particularly good example here is in Brazil, where millions of reais are spent every year by the government with carnival an important local festival,
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, its rates of lower education call for more investment. In conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance,
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, I feel that
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should not count on public money at all.
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is because there are other important issues to be solved that governments can not rule out
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any circumstance
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as health and safety.
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